Question

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A difficult choice I had to make.”（以“一個(gè)艱難的選擇”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）
Using the following points as a reference.（以下問題供參考）
1. Have you ever had a difficult choice to make?
2. What made it so difficult for you?
3. What was your final decision?
4. Do you think it is a right decision?

Answer 1

Our lives are the sum of all our choices. The decisions we make today, may very well play a critical role in our future tomorrow. When I was thirteen, my mother always wanted me a girl who was good at school work. However, I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn’t like study at all, which was not allowed by her. As a result, we quarreled with each other a lot. As time passed by, I gradually found that one should be knowledgeable, no matter what he would be in the future. I decided to work hard and regarded playing the drum as my hobby. Knowledge is power, and I think the choice I’ve made must be wise one.                        

試題分析：本篇作文從題目的提示中可以看出整篇文章應(yīng)該以記敘文為主，時(shí)態(tài)上要注意選取過去時(shí)，最后自我總結(jié)部分進(jìn)行議論，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)即可。本文在寫作時(shí)根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行論述，思路會(huì)比較清晰。根據(jù)“選擇是什么”—“難以選擇的原因”+“選擇過后的自我總結(jié)”。此類記敘文在本次二模和三模的各區(qū)模考中比較常見，例如“A problem I have solved”要加強(qiáng)對(duì)于學(xué)生行文時(shí)態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)換的注意。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。