Question

15．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，詞數(shù)：80-100詞．
我們即將迎來輕松又豐富多彩的假期生活，同學(xué)們一定會安排各種活動，比如宅家、聚會、外出旅行等．請你根據(jù)如下提示，寫一常英文短文，發(fā)布在班級 QQ群中，提醒同子們注意安全．可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
內(nèi)容提示：

Activities	Suggestions
stay at home	keep away from fire
have a party	come back home by 10 o'clock
go out	follow the traffic rules
…	…

參考詞匯：Safety must come first（安全第一）．
注：開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名和地名．
In our daily life，there's always something unexpected．So we must pay more attention to our safety in our coming vacation．When we stay at home，we are supposed to stay away from fire，and make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave．If we have a party，it's safe to come back home by 10 o'clock at night．And we had better not make friends with strangers when we go out for a trip．We must be careful when we take photos and climb the mountains
We should follow the traffic rules when walking across the road．Besides，remember it's dangerous to swim alone in the river
All in all，safety must come first!Have a happy and safe vacation!．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是在班級QQ群中發(fā)布提示，提醒大家注意假期間的安全．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1宅家：遠(yuǎn)離火
2聚會：10點前回家
3外出旅行：遵守交通規(guī)則
常用到的重點短語：
pay attention to 關(guān)注
be supposed to do sth 應(yīng)該做某事
stay away from 遠(yuǎn)離
had better do sth 最好做某事
all in all 總之
【高分句型】
1．①When we stay at home，we ②are supposed to stay away from fire，and ③make sure ④doors and windows are shut ⑤before we leave．
①when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．
②be supposed to do sth 應(yīng)該做某事
③make sure 確定
④省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句，作為make sure的賓語．
⑤before引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句．

2．We should follow the traffic rules when walking across the road．
when walking across the road是省略句，完整表達(dá)是when we walk across the road．

3．①Besides，remember②it's dangerous to swim alone in the river．
①besides 另外
②省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句，作為remember的賓語．it是形式主語，動詞不定式是真正主語．

解答 In our daily life，there's always something unexpected．So we must pay more attention to our safety in our coming vacation．When we stay at home，we are supposed to stay away from fire，and make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave．【高分句型】（宅家：遠(yuǎn)離火，離開關(guān)門窗）If we have a party，it's safe to come back home by 10 o'clock at night．（聚會：10點前回家）And we had better not make friends with strangers when we go out for a trip．We must be careful when we take photos and climb the mountains．We should follow the traffic rules when walking across the road．【高分句型】Besides，remember it's dangerous to swim alone in the river【高分句型】（外出旅行，不和陌生人交朋友，遵守交通規(guī)則，不獨自在河里游泳等）
All in all，safety must come first!Have a happy and safe vacation!（總結(jié)）

點評 本題是一篇提綱作文，要求在班級QQ群中發(fā)布提示，提醒大家注意假期間的安全，要求從"呆在家、參加晚會、外出"等方面告誡大家注意相關(guān)的安全事項．短文主要用一般將來時態(tài)，可以用if引出的條件狀語從句來假設(shè)不同的情況下的安全注意事項．可以用第一人稱或用些祈使句來進(jìn)行表達(dá)．短文第一段開篇點題：我們要多注意假期安全；第二段從幾個不同的方面說明分別要注意哪些安全問題．用when，if，we must，we should，besides等等開頭，分別表述了不同方面的安全．層次清楚，要點分明，讓人一目了然．其中的be supposed to，had better等短語，不定式作主語的句型、分詞短語作狀語的表達(dá)方式等等都為本文增色不少．第三段畫龍點睛：安全必須放在首位．并祝大家假期快樂、安全．首尾呼應(yīng)，主旨鮮明．