Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（本題10分）

假設(shè)你是Bob，你的英文老師讓你們寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于你未來(lái)工作的文章，內(nèi)容要求：

你長(zhǎng)大后想做什么職業(yè)。

你為什么喜歡這份職業(yè)。

你如何去實(shí)現(xiàn)它。

你覺(jué)得你的未來(lái)的職業(yè)怎么樣？

字?jǐn)?shù)要求70---80

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Everyone has his dream job. What is my dream job? My dream is to be a doctor in the future. I think it’s a great and interesting job. Because first I can help many patients. It’s a hard job ，but I don’t mind it. I can find some joy in this job. Second I think I can also help myself and my family If I can become a doctor in the future so I like my job.Third I think I can learn a lot from my job because I have to learn some related subjects if I want to bea doctor. Besides ,I can meet different people in my job every day and I can learn somethingfrom them. And I would like to study hard at my lessons to prepare to be a doctor. I believe I can be a good doctor.

【解析】

試題分析：小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如I think I can learn a lot from my job because I have to learn some related subjects if I want to be a doctor .I would like to study hard at my lessons to prepare to be a doctor等，Because等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理.

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)作文。