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為了交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率，《二十一世紀英文報》正在舉辦以‘How to be a good learner?’為題的征文比賽。

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要求：內(nèi)容符合學(xué)習(xí)實際，語句通順，書寫規(guī)范。 80詞左右。

How to be a good learner?

As a good learner, we should

 

 

 

I hope all these will be helpful to you.

 

Answer 1

As a good learner,we should have good habits and ways in learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class,we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time.It's good to study in groups and help each other. As a student, working hard is important, but don't forget to do sports and keep healthy. We should do more reading in our free time.If we have any problems,we'd better ask others for help.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求我們以How to be a good learner?為題寫一篇短文。寫作之前我們可以自己確定本文的主要內(nèi)容，如作為一名優(yōu)秀的學(xué)習(xí)者，我們應(yīng)該有好的習(xí)慣和方法；課前要做好準備，課后好好復(fù)習(xí)按時完成作業(yè)；要努力學(xué)習(xí)；好好進行鍛煉，保持健康等。主要內(nèi)容雖然已經(jīng)列好，但是很多內(nèi)容都需要我們自己去充實，讓它變得完整、合理，內(nèi)容豐富，這就需要花費我們的想象力，以及我們平時積累的知識。另外，寫作時，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。作者清楚明了地告訴我們作為一名優(yōu)秀的學(xué)習(xí)者應(yīng)該做到的幾點，，層次非常的清晰。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如As a student, working hard is important, but don't forget to do sports and keep healthy. It's good to study in groups and help each other.等。

考點：話題類作文。