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11．你喜歡閱讀嗎？閱讀能使人明智，使人充實(shí)． 請(qǐng)你以"Reading is Very Important"為題，寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)閱讀的短文
要點(diǎn)：1．閱讀的益處：
2．你的閱讀習(xí)慣（喜歡的書(shū)籍，閱讀的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，購(gòu)書(shū)方式等）
3．你的閱讀體會(huì)．
4．號(hào)召大家多閱讀．
提示：1．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名．
2．短文中應(yīng)包含至少3個(gè)要點(diǎn)．
3．書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，語(yǔ)句通順，連貫，詞數(shù)不少于80．
注意：文章開(kāi)頭已給出，比計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Reading is Very Important
Reading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge．
I like reading a lot．In my spare time，I often read newspapers and magazines，from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world．I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happy．On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library．Andl I often read for about half an hour before going to bed．Now I usually buy my favorite books on line．
Summer vocalion is coming．I plan to read more English books to improve my English abilities I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates．It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us．Let's do more reading together．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"Reading is Very Importatn"為題，寫(xiě)一篇有關(guān)閱讀的短文．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．閱讀的益處：
2．你的閱讀習(xí)慣（喜歡的書(shū)籍，閱讀的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，購(gòu)書(shū)方式等）
3．你的閱讀體會(huì)．
4．號(hào)召大家多閱讀
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
around the world 全世界
and so on  等等
make sb+adj  讓某人怎樣
spend+時(shí)間+doing sth 花時(shí)間做某事
share sth with sb 和某人分享某某
【高分句型】
1．I also read my favorite books ①such as story books，novels and so on，②which make me relax and happy．
①such as 例如，and so on  等等
②which作為關(guān)系詞的定語(yǔ)從句，which做主語(yǔ)，修飾先行詞favorite books．
2．And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed．
before going to bed是省略句，完整表達(dá)是before I go to bed．
3．①It's time for us to form a good reading habit②because it's very important and necessary for us．
①It's time for sb to do sth 某人做某事的時(shí)間到了
②because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句

解答 Reading is Very Important
Reading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge．（閱讀的益處）
I like reading a lot．In my spare time，I often read newspapers and magazines，from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world．I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happy．【高分句型】On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library．And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed．【高分句型】Now I usually buy my favorite books on line．（閱讀習(xí)慣，閱讀體會(huì)）
Summer vocalion is coming．I plan to read more English books to improve my English abilities I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates．It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us．【高分句型】Let's do more reading together．（號(hào)召大家多閱讀）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇給材料作文．本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱，寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．