Question

書面表達(dá)（15分）

根據(jù)提示，以“My friends and I”為題寫一篇70詞左右的短文，表達(dá)自己交友的觀點(diǎn)。（你好友的名字叫Tina）

1、我們倆看上去很像，但有些方面不同；

2、我們都瘦，但Tina更瘦；

3、Tina比我高，比我更外向，比我讀書勤奮；

4、我們都有黑眼睛、黑頭發(fā)；

5、我們都喜歡體育節(jié)目，但我喜歡看肥皂劇，她喜歡看談話節(jié)目，因為她希望有朝一日能成為一名電視臺記者；

6、我們雖然有不同，但我們是好朋友。

My friends and I

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Friends and I

I like to have friends who are different from me. My friend is Tina. In some ways we look the same, and in some ways we look different. We are thin.But Tina is thinner than me.We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller, quieter than me. And she studies harder than me. She is more outgoing and funnier than I. Both she and I like sports programme,but I like soap opera,she likes watching talk show,because she hopes to be a TV reporter one day.Though we are different in some ways,we are good friends.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇讓小作者介紹自己和自己的朋友的文章。小作者把列舉的要點(diǎn)寫的很清楚。另外，寫作時，小作者還注意了語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這是一篇比較不錯的作文。小作者寫的這些內(nèi)容也比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。文章中還用了一些比較好的句型，如Both she and I like sports programme,but I like soap opera,she likes watching talk show,because she hopes to be a TV reporter one day.Though we are different in some ways,we are good friends.

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文。