Question

按要求寫一篇關(guān)于旅行的文章，以“My happy trip”為題，字?jǐn)?shù)70詞左右，要求包括以下內(nèi)容：

1. 旅游地點

2. 和哪些人一起去的

3. 天氣情況，交通方式

4. 旅游過程中所經(jīng)歷的活動

5. 旅游感受。

My happy trip

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I went to climb the Great Wall with my parents this summer vacation. I’m glad to know you’re interested in this trip. I’ll tell you as much as possible now.

The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world. It attracts thousands of tourists both at home and abroad every day. It runs across the mountains, like a dragon.

When we got there we were very excited that we began toclimbimmediately. The steps sometimes were very flat, but sometimes very steep. After two hours of climbing, we got to the top at last. I enjoyed the beauty of the mountains andtook a lot of photos. I felt really proud and thought of the famous saying: He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man.

If you come to China, I’ll be glad to take you to the Great Wall so that you can appreciate the beautiful scenery of the Great Wall.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。要求介紹。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders of the world。 I enjoyed the beauty of the mountains andtook a lot of photos.等，When，if等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點：話題作文。