Question

俗話(huà)說(shuō)“失去了才懂得珍惜”。三年過(guò)去了，我們即將畢業(yè)。你是否有一些讓你感到遺憾或后悔的事情？如果再給你一次機(jī)會(huì)的話(huà)…… 請(qǐng)你以“Give Me Another Chance”為題，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，告訴我們你的想法。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入單詞總數(shù)。
溫馨提示: 短文中請(qǐng)勿使用真實(shí)姓名、地點(diǎn)或所在學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。
Give Me Another Chance
How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.

Answer 1

Give Me Another Chance
How time flies! We have spent three years living and studying together in the school.
Now, I am leaving our school. I want to enter a good school, but I am weak in English. I’m afraid I can’t succeed. I regret that I haven’t learned English well in the past three years. I missed many chances though my teacher encouraged me.
As the saying goes, “It’s never too late to learn”. If I have another chance, I should try my best to learn it well. I will practice listening, reading, speaking and writing as much as I can. I will preview lessons before class, listen carefully in class and finish my homework on time. I will ask my teacher for help if I have trouble. I believe I will cherish this chance and do it better.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。在要點(diǎn)中給出了寫(xiě)作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動(dòng)筆前要圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，確定時(shí)態(tài)主要詞匯等問(wèn)題，根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)和時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配，注意條件從句的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性；語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等。