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作文：

假設(shè)你是Millie，根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一封給網(wǎng)友Jane的信。

1．北京是一個(gè)繁華的城市，有許多名勝古跡。

2．有許多博物館、公園和購物中心。城鎮(zhèn)公路兩邊是綠樹。這些使北京的生活更舒適和豐富多彩。

3．上個(gè)月邀請(qǐng)了叔叔Tom游覽北京。他為人慷慨，有幽默感。

4．當(dāng)他到達(dá)時(shí)，不能相信自己的眼睛。他說建筑變得更高了。他決定盡快把這些告訴他的朋友們。

注意：1)正確地書寫格式和使用時(shí)態(tài)。

2)短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)。

3)詞數(shù)80左右，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使句子通順、連貫。

4)書寫不規(guī)范，不整潔，從原得分中扣1－2分。

Dear Jane,

________________________________________

Yours

Millie

Answer 1

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解析：

Dear Jane,

　　Beijing is a busy city with many places of interest．There are many museums, parks and shopping centers．Green trees are on each side of the highway．All these make life in Beijing more comfortable and colorful．

　　Last month, I invited Uncle Tom to visit Beijing．He is generous and has a good sense of humor．When he arrived here, he couldn't believe his eyes．He said the buildings became higher．He decided to tell his friends about these as soon as possible．

　　I hope you can come and enjoy yourself here too．

Yours,

Millie