Question

書面表達

Use the suggested questions as clues．Write at least 80 words on the topic “To Be a Lovely Yanchengness”．(根據(jù)建議回答的問題，以“做一個可愛的鹽城人”為題寫話。詞數(shù)不少于80個，標點符號不占格)：

Suggested questions：Why should we be lovely Yanchenese?

What should or shouldn’t a lovely Yanchenese do?

What are you doing to be a lovely Yanchenese?

To Be a Lovely Yanchenese

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　(For reference)

　　Yancheng is developing quickly．Every day thousands of tourists come to visit it, so we should act well to show that the city and its people are lovely．In order to be lovely Yanchenese, we should always be ready to help others．We shouldn’t speak loudly in public places or throw litter on the ground．I want to be a lovely Yanchenese．I am now studying hard and getting ready for the future．

　　書面表達評分原則：

　　1．本題滿分為15分，按5個檔次給分；

　　2．評分時先根據(jù)文章的內容和語言確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量、確定或調整檔次．最后給分。

　　評分標準：

　　1．(13－15分)合理避開用生疏詞匯進行分析，說明合理，語言組織精密，結構安排嚴謹，層次分明，無語法錯淡或基本無錯誤。

　　2．(10－12分)能夠對所提供角度進行分析，寫出主要要點，語句較流暢，基本上無語法錯誤。

　　3．(7－9分)能夠對話題加以分析、說明，但主要使用已學詞匯來說明。寫出基本要點，語句基本流暢，有少量語法錯誤，但不影響理解。

　　4．(4－6分)寫出個別要點，語法錯誤多，只有個別句子可讀。

　　5．(0－3分)寫出個別單詞或詞組。