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為了交流經(jīng)驗(yàn)，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率，《中學(xué)生英文報(bào)》正在舉辦以“How to be a good learner?”為題的征文比賽，請(qǐng)你踴躍投稿。內(nèi)容提示如下：
 
注意：
1. 對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。
2. 詞數(shù)90左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should                                                
I hope all these will be helpful to you.

Answer 1

How to be a good learner
As a good learner,we should have good habits and ways in learner.we need ro get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class, after class,wemust revise and finish our homework on time. It’s good to  study in groups and heip each other. As a seudent,working hard is important,but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have any problems,we’d better ask others for help, I hope all these wiil be helpful to you.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，介紹如何做一個(gè)好的學(xué)習(xí)者。本題給出的材料是幾個(gè)問(wèn)題，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)先認(rèn)真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內(nèi)容，確定主要短語(yǔ)，句式等問(wèn)題。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤.