Question

新學(xué)期，我市多家中小學(xué)響應(yīng)市政府的倡議“家在揚(yáng)州·文明餐桌行動(dòng)”，展開(kāi)相關(guān)“光盤(pán)行動(dòng)”的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)以“Against Food Waste”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：
1．“光盤(pán)”行動(dòng)的目的和意義；
2．你對(duì)“光盤(pán)”行動(dòng)所持的態(tài)度；
3．你對(duì)此行動(dòng)的做法（至少寫(xiě)3條）。
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右。短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．短文須包括所給提示，可適當(dāng)、合理發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；
3．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
Against Food Waste
At the beginning of the new school term, many schools called on their students to do something for the campaign -“Clearing Your Plate”．
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In a word, we should take action to fight against food waste.

Answer 1

Against Food Waste
At the beginning of the new school term, many schools called on their students to do something for the campaign -“Clearing Your Plate”．
In a word, we should take action to fight against food waste.

試題分析：本題要求寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于節(jié)約糧食的短文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)。寫(xiě)作中注意將這次活動(dòng)的原因介紹清楚，并提出自己希望。結(jié)合材料可知本文時(shí)態(tài)人稱問(wèn)題比較復(fù)雜，涉及過(guò)去，現(xiàn)在和將來(lái)三種時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配問(wèn)題及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫(xiě)好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類作文首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。