Question

書面表達(dá) （共15分）

隨著科技的發(fā)展, 電視機(jī)越來越便宜, 在人們生活中也越來越普及。電視在給人們提供方便的同時(shí)也帶來了一些不利的方面, 請(qǐng)以The Advantages and Disadvantages (缺點(diǎn)) of Watching TV為題, 寫一篇作文, 發(fā)表你的看法。

要點(diǎn)提示: 1. 電視給人們生活帶來便利;

2. 電視也帶來不好的影響;

3. 你對(duì)電視所持的態(tài)度。

要求: 1. 表達(dá)清楚, 語句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫規(guī)范;

2. 詞數(shù)80左右 (開頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

The Advantages and Disadvantages of Watching TV

Nowadays, TVs are becoming cheaper and cheaper and almost every family has at least one TV.

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Answer 1

Nowadays, TVs are becoming cheaper and cheaper and almost every family has at least one TV.There are all kinds of TV programs all the day.

TVs make our life more wonderful and convenient.We can get kinds of news fron them,The technology channel can teach us more knowledge of science and arts,while the plays can make us relax and the TV advertisement inform us more products.

However,every coin has two sides.TVs still have their disadvantages.Once students are indulged in watching TV at night,maybe they can't concentrate on their daily study.And watching TV too long is bad for our eyes.Too much recreational program may led youths to an ininproper way such as smoking,sex,violence and so on.

All in all ,TVs have their advantages and disadvantages.We must make good use of them in the correct way.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如We can get kinds of news fron them,The technology channel can teach us more knowledge of science and arts,while the plays can make us relax and the TV advertisement inform us more products.等，All in all等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。