Question

人的一生要學(xué)會很多技能，你一定還記得你第一次學(xué)會某件事的經(jīng)歷，請以“The first time I learned to…” 為題，寫一篇英語短文放在你的成長手冊中，記錄下這次經(jīng)歷的整個過程及帶給你的人生感悟。

要求清楚地表達(dá)事情的整個過程和感悟，詞數(shù)70左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

The first time I learned to…

In our life, we have to learn many skills. I will never forget the first time I learned to____________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

The first time I learned to…

In our life, we have to learn many skills. I will never forget the first time I learned to ride a bike. That was a summer afternoon. I told my father I wanted to learn to ride a bike. My father was pleased to be my coach. At first I was a little afraid and fell off the bike again and again. Whenever I wanted to give up, my father would encourage me to try again. Finally I could ride. How excited and proud I was!

From then on, I could ride bike to any place I want to go and from this I know that “Never give up and I will be successful”.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。主要介紹自己第一次學(xué)會做某事的經(jīng)歷。要詳細(xì)描述這次經(jīng)歷的整個過程及帶給你的人生感悟。注意描述經(jīng)歷時(shí)有過去時(shí)態(tài)。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文能運(yùn)用正確的時(shí)態(tài)，詳細(xì)的描述自己學(xué)騎自行車的經(jīng)歷，表達(dá)自己的感悟。在短文中運(yùn)用了較高級的句型。如Whenever I wanted to give up, my father would encourage me to try again.，How excited and proud I was!，I could ride bike to any place I want to go等。這使文章更豐富。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文。