Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（10分）
請(qǐng)用80詞左右為你的同齡人寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于提高英語(yǔ)水平的短文，題目自擬。主要內(nèi)容包括：
1. 要對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)有濃厚的興趣；   2. 學(xué)唱英語(yǔ)歌曲有助于記單詞；
3. 記英語(yǔ)日記（diary）；          4. 用英語(yǔ)交流，表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)

Answer 1

Learn it, love it!
　　Many friends often ask me, "How to learn English well?" I always tell them, "Try your best to like it first!" As everyone knows, nothing is difficult if you like to do it.
　　In fact, learning English is really interesting. Singing English songs is a good way to remember words. It can make you believe yourself. Keeping a diary in English is also a good way. Trying to use what you have learned to express your ideas is really great. And talking with others in English is interesting, too.
Come on, my friends.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文,要求寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的短文。故動(dòng)筆前先要圍繞自己想要表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)確定材料，表達(dá)自己對(duì)這起事件的看法。結(jié)合材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在及時(shí)態(tài)，這方面需要注意的問(wèn)題比較少。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫(xiě)出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)，注意動(dòng)名詞表示抽象的反復(fù)發(fā)生的動(dòng)作,如:learning English學(xué)英語(yǔ);singing English songs唱英語(yǔ)歌曲等.學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.