Question

Write at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to make...feel happy ” 以《我想使……高興》為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）
Suggested phrases and expressions(詞組): not afford to buy...;  spend ...doing something with somebody; bake something for somebody;  make one’s own present(s) ;  become healthier
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Answer 1

I’d like to make _my mother_ feel happy
Mother love is so great and selfless that ①I can never do too much to make my mother feel happy in return. ②With the approach of Mother’s Day, I want to ③extend my gratitude to my dear mom. Since as a student, I can’t afford to buy something expensive, such as perfume, clothes, I have decided to make my own present. ④Hard as I tried, ⑤it’s never easy to bake a perfect cake for the first time. After finishing my homework, I have spent most of my time practicing baking with my father these days. I just can’t wait to share the gift for her and see the big smile on her face.

試題分析：現(xiàn)在普遍的情況是學(xué)生會寫議論文，因?yàn)橛刑茁房裳�。但是在中考中，還是會以記敘類的文章為主。那么我們一起來看一下如何把記敘類的文章寫的條理清晰。文章行文思路是：1 開篇寫母愛偉大，并引出母親節(jié)想為母親做些什么的想法，開門見山，點(diǎn)題，并與時(shí)事結(jié)合。 2 使用給出的建議詞組（也可不用），表達(dá)為什么要親手做禮物，和做禮物過程中的不容易 3 以迫不及待想要把禮物給母親的心情收尾，the big smile再一次點(diǎn)題。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】亮點(diǎn)一：使用can never… too… “再怎么怎么樣也不為過”的句式，也可替換為can’t… too…，最經(jīng)典的例句：It’s never too old to learn. 活到老學(xué)到老。
亮點(diǎn)二：With the approach of Mother’s Day, =" As" Mother’s Day is coming，用介詞結(jié)構(gòu)短語比較新穎。
亮點(diǎn)三：extend one’s gratitude to/towards sb. 表達(dá)謝意，學(xué)過新二的同學(xué)一定見過，要活學(xué)活用哦！
亮點(diǎn)四：讓步狀語從句用as引導(dǎo)時(shí)的倒裝用法。
亮點(diǎn)五：it’s never easy to do =" it’s" difficult to do，有的時(shí)候只需要轉(zhuǎn)一個(gè)彎，句式就會富有變化。強(qiáng)調(diào)了自己做禮物給媽媽的不容易，更凸顯禮物珍貴。