Question

很快就要初中畢業(yè)了，中考完后每個(gè)人都有自己的計(jì)劃或者愿望。下課時(shí)，有幾位同學(xué)談了自己的想法，有人想學(xué)習(xí)，有人想旅游，你又有什么想法呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文介紹一下吧：

Jim	以前很忙，沒有時(shí)間玩，想去北京旅游放松一下，并且學(xué)習(xí)更多中國歷史。
Amy	對(duì)電腦感興趣，考完試后去學(xué)習(xí)電腦, 這樣能在電腦上做很多事情。
You	……

提示詞：used to    travel    learn more about…   after the exam    hope  
要求：1）所有提示詞都應(yīng)用上，語言運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確得當(dāng)，句子通順，表達(dá)符合語言邏輯，可發(fā)揮適當(dāng)想像，字?jǐn)?shù)80左右。
2）不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及所在學(xué)校名稱等個(gè)人相關(guān)信息。
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Answer 1

Jim used to be very busy and hardly had time to play. After the exam, he would like to travel to Beijing to relax himself. He thinks it’s a beautiful city. He can learn more history about China at the same time. Amy, a girl who is interested in computer, hopes to learn how to use the computer after the exam. Then she can do many things on computer. As for me, I would like to do something different. Maybe I will volunteer my time to help other people in the poor area. I’m sure I’ll be happy when I help them. ( 此部分為考生自主發(fā)揮部分)

這是一篇給材料作文，所給材料非常詳細(xì)，分別介紹兩個(gè)人的想法。寫作中注意將兩個(gè)人的想法表達(dá)清楚注意應(yīng)用所給單詞短語。在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。