Question

一家英文雜志社正在調(diào)查不同國(guó)家孩子母親節(jié)給媽媽送禮物的情況。假如你是李濤，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中的信息并結(jié)合自身看法，用英語(yǔ)給雜志社寫(xiě)一封信。

Children	Country	Gifts	Reasons
Lily	UK	A green scarf	1. need one 2. favorite color
Tom	USA	A hand-made card	1. mean a lot 2. easy to make
Li Tao	China	…	1. … 2. …

 
注意： 1. 內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息；
2. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾的內(nèi)容不計(jì)入總詞量；
3. 短文中不能包括個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名與校名；
4. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右。
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about how children from different countries choose gifts for their mothers on Mother’s Day. ______________                                   
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Tao

Answer 1

One possible version: 
Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you about how children from different countries choose gifts for their mothers on Mother’s Day.
Lily is from England. She’d like to give a green scarf as a gift to her mother. Her mother’s favorite color is green and she really needs a scarf. Tom comes from the USA. He’d like to give his mother a hand-made card. Because it’s easy to make a card by himself and it means a lot.
My name is Li Tao. I’m from China. My mother is a teacher. I want to give her a nice cup. Then she can use it to drink a cup of tea and have a good rest after work. 
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Tao

試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作不難，首先對(duì)Lily的情況進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)，說(shuō)明她送圍巾的原因Her mother’s favorite color is green and she really needs a scarf.然后對(duì)Tom的情況進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，并說(shuō)明送這個(gè)禮物的原因Because it’s easy to make a card by himself and it means a lot. 最后介紹自己的情況，可以說(shuō)自己的媽媽是老師，所以想送一個(gè)杯子給媽媽這樣?jì)寢尵涂梢杂盟鼇?lái)沏茶，工作后可以得到休息Then she can use it to drink a cup of tea and have a good rest after work.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文難度不大，寫(xiě)作條理性要把握好，對(duì)于初三的作文，不要求有很華美的詞語(yǔ)，重在培養(yǎng)自己連詞成句的能力，避免中式英文。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中要多去背誦范文，對(duì)表達(dá)好的句子，短語(yǔ)要進(jìn)行積累，并默寫(xiě)，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無(wú)患。