Question

目前，因?yàn)樯龑W(xué)、考試等諸多原因，中學(xué)生的壓力很大，身心疲憊。怎樣才能減緩壓力，在繁重的學(xué)習(xí)之余學(xué)會(huì)放松自己呢？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，談?wù)勀愕淖龇ā?br />提示：1、放松自己，聽音樂、看電視；2、進(jìn)行體育鍛煉；
3、參加興趣活動(dòng)；4、與父母交流或上網(wǎng)和朋友聊天。
要求：1、用上所有提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2、語言正確，行文流暢，書寫規(guī)范；
3、詞數(shù)：80左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)；
4、文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名及校名。
We should learn to relax!
Today, middle school students are under great pressure because of so many exams. ________________________________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

We should learn to relax!
Today, middle school students are under great pressure because of so many exams. So we should learn to relax ourselves. Sometimes we can listen to music or watch TV. It can make us relaxed. We should do sports after school. It can also help us a lot. On weekends, we should take part in different activities. For example, we can join the English club. It’s a good way to talk with our parents or chat online with friends, too. So we can understand and get on well with each other. We can also take a walk when we are free.
In these ways, we will study and live happily.

試題分析：本文的寫作首先提出總起句說明我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)放松自己we should learn to relax ourselves.然后對(duì)題目中提到的四點(diǎn)措施進(jìn)行描寫放松自己，聽音樂、看電視listen to music or watch TV；進(jìn)行體育鍛煉do sports；參加興趣活動(dòng)take part in different activities.；與父母交流或上網(wǎng)和朋友聊天talk with our parents or chat online with friends.最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)，說明用這些方法我們能夠?qū)W的更好，生活的更好In these ways, we will study and live happily.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：在對(duì)于諸如此類文章的寫作，學(xué)生要注意變換句式，可以多使用高級(jí)詞匯和多變換句式。學(xué)生在平時(shí)的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達(dá)。英語的寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達(dá)，對(duì)于不會(huì)表達(dá)的意思要學(xué)會(huì)替換，同時(shí)注意用平時(shí)在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達(dá)自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫出新意，寫出文采。