Question

假如你是Peter,你的朋友Tom 邀請你周末一起去野炊，但是你的日程已經(jīng)排滿。請根據(jù)提示寫一封信，說明你不能去的理由。提示：have a picnic, at the weekend, have a piano lesson, on Sunday morning,play basketball,go to a party, go shopping,revise(復(fù)習(xí)) for the English test
Dear Tom,
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Yours
Peter.

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your invitation. I’m sorry I can't have a picnic with you at the weekend.I'll be busy  that day. I have to have a piano lesson on Sunday morning. After that, I’m going to play basketball with my friends. My sister is going to be 12years, and we will have a party for her. So I will go to the party on Sunday afternoon. Because I need a lot of things, I’m going to go shopping,and buy them. At night, I’m going to revise(復(fù)習(xí)) for the English test. It is very important for me.
Can you have a picnic with me next Saturday ?
Yours
Peter.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，湯姆寫信給彼得說明不能和他一起去野炊的理由。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如： I have to......； I’m going to......； we will.....及Can you......？等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭感謝彼得的邀請，接下來說明周末不能和他一起去野炊的理由，最后邀請他下周末一起去野炊。此處用了have a piano lesson，on Sunday morning，  a lot of 及go shopping等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。