Question

請根據(jù)下列提示, 寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語短文。（80詞左右）
提示: 我的家鄉(xiāng)位于山腳下，一條小河從旁邊流過。兩年前，南面建起一座化工廠，排出大量廢氣、廢水，造成嚴(yán)重污染，影響人們健康。如今政府采取了一系列保護(hù)環(huán)境、防止污染的措施。我的家鄉(xiāng)正變得越來越美。
at the foot of ,in the south of ,serious, take measures to do sth.., more and more
要求: 1.文章必須包括以上主要內(nèi)容和提示詞，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；
2.80詞左右。

Answer 1

A; My hometown is so beautiful. It has changed a lot during the past ten years. The river near the factory is very clear. You can’t imagine what it looked like ten years ago. It was dirty and smelt bad. You could always find rubbish and dead fish in it. Can you see the straight and wide street next to the river? It was once very narrow. Now, in the town, you can breathe fresh and clean air every day. But the air in the past was very bad—it was full of dust all day long. Thanks to the efforts of the government, our environment is becoming better and better.

這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的短文。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，注意文后要適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的感想。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文的時態(tài)問題比較復(fù)雜，涉及過去，現(xiàn)在和將來三種時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點評：做英語書面表達(dá)時，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。