Question

書面表達(dá)
劉偉，無(wú)臂鋼琴演奏者。他十歲時(shí)在一次意外中失去雙臂，但他并沒有放棄成為一名鋼琴家的夢(mèng)想。經(jīng)過(guò)用腳刻苦練習(xí)彈琴，他最終在“中國(guó)達(dá)人秀”(China's Got Talent)的舞臺(tái)上實(shí)現(xiàn)了自己的夢(mèng)想。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
內(nèi)容包括：
1．簡(jiǎn)要描述劉偉的經(jīng)歷。
2．談?wù)剰乃�的�?jīng)歷中得到的啟示。
作文要求：
1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。
2．語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Liu Wei, an armless piano player, has a very special experience...
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Answer 1

Liu Wei,  an armless piano player,  has a very special experience. He lost his arms in an accident when he was 10, but he didn't give up his dream of being a pianist. He tried to practice playing the piano with his feet. Finally he realized his dream in “China's Got Talent”．
As a student, I've learnt a lot from his story. We may meet a lot of difficulties in our future life, but we should believe that our dream will come true by working hard. No matter how hard life is, we won't fail unless we give up our hope.

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求寫一篇介紹無(wú)臂鋼琴演奏者劉偉的短文。本題給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，寫作中首先要描述一下劉偉的經(jīng)歷，然后談?wù)勛约菏艿降膯⑹�。通過(guò)閱讀材料可知在敘述劉偉的經(jīng)歷部分主要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，在表達(dá)自己感想時(shí)可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)及將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。動(dòng)筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：做英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤。