Question

書面表達
假定你是張強，是一名初二學(xué)生。上星期天你從報紙上看到保護野生動物俱樂部(Friend of Nature)的招聘廣告。請你寫封簡短的應(yīng)聘信，介紹自己的情況(見下表)，表示愿意為俱樂部做一些工作，并請俱樂部負責(zé)人考慮并盡早予以答復(fù)。在作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名。

姓名	張強	年齡	15
身體狀況	健康	性格	樂觀的；誠實；有幽默感
愛好	英語、旅游、打籃球
相關(guān)經(jīng)歷	去年就保護野生動物給報社和雜志寫信
理由	……(自擬2條加入俱樂部的理由)
聯(lián)系方式	010—8255668；zhangqiang@163.com

注意：1. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2. 詞數(shù)70-80。
Dear sir,
I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I'm writing to tell you I'd like to become a member of Friend of Nature.
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Yours sincerely
Zhang Qiang

Answer 1

Dear sir,
I read your ad in the newspaper last Sunday. Now I'm writing to tell you I'd like to become a member of Friend of Nature.
I am a student from Grade 8. I’m in good health. I am very helpful and ready to help people any time. You can believe what I say. I have a good sense of humour. Anyone never feel bored or unhappy when he is with me. My favourite lesson is English. I’m also interested in travelling and playing basketball. I often practise with my friends on Wednesday afternoon after school. Last year I wrote to newspapers and magazines about how to protect wild animals.
I would like to become a member of Friend of Nature because I enjoy the beauty of nature and like wildlife a lot. I am interested in reading about wildlife and I quite understand the important of protecting wildlife. I want to do something to help wildlife and protect the nature.
I will be very happy if I can become a member of your club. You can call me on 010—8255668 or e-mail me at zhangqiang@163.com.
Yours sincerely
Zhang Qiang

解析試題分析：本文的寫作首先對自己個人的情況進行介紹，包括年齡，職業(yè)，健康狀況，性格等。對自己最喜歡的科目也要進行介紹，并且說明自己非常喜歡旅游熱愛親近自然，自己也有相關(guān)的工作經(jīng)歷，如wrote to newspapers and magazines about how to protect wild animals，第二段對想加入俱樂部的理由進行描寫，可以從自己喜歡野生動物，理解保護他們的重要性方面進行闡述，最后表達自己非常期待加入俱樂部，期待回信。
考點：提綱類寫作
點評：在對于諸如此類文章的寫作，學(xué)生在平時的練習(xí)、學(xué)習(xí)生活中要善于積累常用的表達。按照提綱的提示，有條理的將各個信息表達出來，英寫作過程中切忌使用重復(fù)的表達，對于不會表達的意思要學(xué)會替換，同時注意用平時在課本中或是閱讀中積累的單詞句型來自如的表達自己的意思，這樣文章才能寫出新意，寫出文采。