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假如你是育才中學的學生劉海,你和同學張紅一起向學校吳校長推薦同學李濤為學生會主席,請用英語寫一篇推薦稿,內(nèi)容要點如下:

1、李濤，九年級一班班長。

2、聰明,幾次數(shù)學競賽得獎。謙虛, 從不炫耀.

3、自信,不怕當眾演講�；顫�,善于交流。 4、組織能力強……

5、認為他是學生會主席的最合適的人選,希望得到校長同意。

注意：

1、推薦信必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫；

2、第 4點必須用2-3句話適當發(fā)揮；

3、詞數(shù)90個左右,文章開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計入總次數(shù)。

Dear Mr Wu,

I’m writing to recommend Li Tao as the chairperson of the Students’ Union. I think he has many good qualities for this position.

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Yours sincerely,

Liu Hai Zhang Hong

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Wu,

I’m writing to recommend Li Tao as the chairperson of the Students’ Union. I think he has many good qualities for this position.

Li Tao is the monitor of Class 1 Grade 9. He is clever. He has won several maths competitions, but he is modest and never shows off. He is confident. He is not afraid of speaking in front of many people. He is lively and is good at communicating with others. He is very organized. He plans his study and work very well. He has successfully organized many class meetings.

We think Li Tao is the most suitable person to be the chairman of the Students’ Union. I hope that you agree with us.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Hai Zhang Hong

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以劉海的身份，和同學張紅一起向學校吳校長寫一封推薦信，推薦李濤同學做學生會的主席。題目中給我們列出了短文中需要包括的要點，我們需要將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達出來。我們要從李濤同學的學習、性格、愛好、能力等方面介紹一下李濤的情況，說明他是學生會主席的合適人選。介紹這些情況時，我們只需要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來表述就行，并且主語都是第三人稱李濤，因此我們要特別注意每句話中謂語動詞的形式。其中要特別注意第四點中，我們需要用自己的話來講這一條補充完整，這就需要我們發(fā)揮自己的想象力，補充的內(nèi)容要符合上下文的文意。寫作時，要適當使用一些句型、句式，使文章表達流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文，作者按照題目的要求，將李濤的情況介紹了一下，覺得他是學生會主席的合適人選。作者從李濤的學習情況、性格愛好、組織能力等方面，介紹了李濤，從這些方面可以看出，李濤是可以勝任學生會主席的工作的。作文中作者主要使用了一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱單數(shù)形式，每個句子中的謂語動詞的形式都很準確。短文中也使用了一些好的句式，這些句式增強了文章的表現(xiàn)力，如He has won several maths competitions, but he is modest and never shows off.、He is not afraid of speaking in front of many people、He has successfully organized many class meetings.、We think Li Tao is the most suitable person to be the chairman of the Students’ Union等。

考點：提綱類作文。