Question

書面表達 （10分）

以My Vacation為題，展開想象，描述一下你的假期。70詞左右。內(nèi)容包括：

時間、人物、地點、做了什么和你的感想。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My vacation

My vacation was very interesting. I did many things such as did my homework, played table tennis, watched TV and so on. On Sundays, I often visit my grandparents with my parents. Sometimes I went shopping with my mother.

One day, I went to a shopping center with my mother. The shopping center wasn’t far from my home. It took us about ten minutes to get there on foot. The shopping center was very big. There were all kinds of things. Every day a lot of people go there to buy things. After staying in the shopping center for about two hours, we got all the things and walked home.

Although I felt very tired, I was very happy because I can help my mother do something.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇開放式的作文，題目要求我們以My vacation為題，描述一下自己的假期。談?wù)撊绾味冗^假期的這個話題在我們的教材上出現(xiàn)過，我們也相應(yīng)的學(xué)過一些有關(guān)的句型。這里我們主要練習(xí)的是一般過去時態(tài)的使用，因為我們記敘的這些事情都是過去的，已經(jīng)發(fā)生過了。還有一些假期中可能從事的活動的短語，如play basketball, went to the beach, visited museums, went camping等。我們可以展開想象，結(jié)合自己的實際情況來表達。題目中要求要有詳細的時間、地點、和什么人、做了什么事，所以我們要記敘一次具體的經(jīng)歷，還要有自己的感想。寫作時要注意短文整天意思的連貫，多使用一些連詞和句型，使文章流暢。

【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文，短文中作者描寫了自己的假期是怎樣度過的，有大體上的概括，也有具體的描述。首先第一段中作者從總體上講述了自己在假期中所做的事情，I did many things such as did my homework, played table tennis, watched TV and so on. On Sundays, I often visit my grandparents with my parents，這里用到了such as 這個短語來進行舉例。第二段中作者具體描述了和媽媽去購物的場景，這一部分中意思連貫，表達流暢。也使用了一些較好的句式，如It took us about ten minutes to get there on foot.、After staying in the shopping center for about two hours, we got all the things and walked home等。最后是作者的感想，簡單的敘述了自己對假期和媽媽購物這件事情的感想。整篇文章意思完整，句式準(zhǔn)確。

考點：開放式作文。