Question

你喜歡閱讀嗎？請你以 “Reading---A good Habit” 為題寫一篇有關(guān)閱讀的短文。
內(nèi)容包括：
1. 你的閱讀習(xí)慣（喜歡的書籍、閱讀的時間地點、購書方式等等）。
2. 閱讀帶給你什么益處（至少兩點）。
3. 號召大家都讀書。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實的名稱和學(xué)生的真實姓名。如需使用學(xué)校名稱或?qū)W生的姓名，一律使用Shantou Middle School 和Jenny.
2. 語句連貫，詞數(shù)80詞左右。
Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. ________________________________
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Answer 1

Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅介紹人物時注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently. I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!Besides，finally等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。