Question

請以“My best friend ”為題，寫一篇7.詞左右的短文。
提示：1.王麗麗今年12歲，是七年級五班的學生；
2.他每天騎車上學。
3.最喜歡英語和音樂
4.喜歡唱歌、彈琴、看電影。
My best friend

Answer 1

My Best Friend 
My best friend is Wang Lili .She is a 12-year-old girl .She studies in Class Five ,Grade Seven with me .Every day ,we ride to school together .She likes English very much .So she always helps me work out some difficult English problems .She is good at music .In her spare time ,she enjoys listening to music and playing the piano .She also likes films ,especially the latest English films .This is my best friend ,a girl who has many hobbies .

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我最好的朋友。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：She is…，She likes…及she enjoys…等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系.
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來介紹她和我在一起的活動，最后介紹她的愛好。此處用了work out，is good at ，in her spare time , enjoys listening to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。