Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示信息，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，以“My best friend”為題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文。

李濤，13歲, 個(gè)子比我高，但視力不好，常戴一副小圓眼鏡。

喜歡聽(tīng)音樂(lè)……

樂(lè)于助人，長(zhǎng)大后想當(dāng)一名醫(yī)生，以幫助更多的人。

我們倆希望上學(xué)晚，放學(xué)早，有更多業(yè)余時(shí)間……

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Litao is my best friend. He is thirteen years old. He is neither too thin nor too fat. He is taller than me, but he has poor eyesight, because he likes watching TV and reading books in bed. He always wears a pair of round glasses. He likes listening to music and playing basketball. He studies hard and is good at every subject. He is helpful and kind to others. He hopes to become a doctor in the future then he can help more people . We both hope to go to school later and finish classes earlier, so that we can have more free time. We’ll be good friends forever.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)描寫(xiě)人物，所以在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要尤其注意一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)的表達(dá)方式。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: neither…nor… , in the future, so that，還有注意比較級(jí)和一些連接詞的用法。 學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。