Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)。
假如你是Mike，下面是各科老師對(duì)你本學(xué)期的期中考試的評(píng)價(jià)。根據(jù)表格提供的信息，把老師對(duì)你的評(píng)價(jià)介紹給你的美國(guó)筆友John，寫(xiě)一封70詞左右的信。

Teachers	What they said
Science	Hard-working
Chinese	Be good at writing
English	Do well in listening
Math	Can do better
...	...

 注意: 1.文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好,不計(jì)詞數(shù);
2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使文章連貫;
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、 校名等相關(guān)信息。
Dear John,
Things are fine here. I finished my mid-term exams last week, and I got my report card today.
                                                                 
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       
                                                                       

Answer 1

略

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作中注意適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意使用所給短語(yǔ)及句式。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在及過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)與時(shí)態(tài)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。