Question

初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。假設(shè)你是張華，身在中考考場(chǎng)，回想自己在父母和師長(zhǎng)的關(guān)愛(ài)和幫助下的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程，心中充滿感戴之情。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中所列信息，用英語(yǔ)給父母或老師寫(xiě)一封80詞左右的短信，深表謝意。(本題提供的是開(kāi)放性提示，屬開(kāi)放性試題。)

感謝對(duì)象	Father	Mother	Miss Gao
參考用語(yǔ)	take care of, love, help, encourage, cheer up…
	thankful, work hard, try to do better…

注意：
1.感謝對(duì)象可在父母或老師中任選其一，請(qǐng)避用真實(shí)姓名和校名。
2.除表格所列關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)外，還可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮、舉例并抒發(fā)感受。
3.信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear__________,
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.
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Yours
Zhang Hua

Answer 1

Dear Miss Gao,
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.
You’ve taken good care of my studies since I came to this school. When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With your help, I’ve made great progress in English. I’m so thankful for your love that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours
Zhang Hua

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求給成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中幫助你的人寫(xiě)一封感謝信。主要用到過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】作者巧妙地把所有的提示詞融入到文章中，完整得敘述了對(duì)老師的感激之情以及感激老師的理由。本文銜接自然流暢，前后連貫，層層推進(jìn)。本文最大的特點(diǎn)是作者使用了很多復(fù)合句， 狀語(yǔ)從句，可見(jiàn)作者對(duì)初中階段的句型掌握地還是很扎實(shí)的