Question

寫作：.某英文報舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。請你根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇90字左右的短文。

過去 1.生活貧困，房屋破舊。

2.污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾滿地。

3.交通不便，游客很少。  

現(xiàn)在1.生活：住房寬敞、明亮；許多人有自己的汽車。

2.環(huán)境：山更綠，水更清，天更藍(lán)......

3.旅游：每年有成千上萬來自世界各地的游客。

將來  請你展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來

注意：

1.文中不得出現(xiàn)具體的地名，否則扣分。

2.標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3.小詞典：環(huán)境environment; 污染pollution;方便convenient.

The Changes of My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version:

The Changes of My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.

Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. The environment has become more beautiful. The mountains have turned greener, the rivers clearer and the sky bluer. There are trees, flowers and grass everywhere. People live a better life.

Their houses are larger and bright. Many people have their own cars. Every year, thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.

I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.  

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫作條理非常清晰，首先對家鄉(xiāng)過去的情況進(jìn)行描寫1.生活貧困，房屋破舊People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small.2.污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾滿地Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere.3.交通不便，游客很少The traffic was not convenient, so few visitors came here.三點(diǎn)表達(dá)的恰到好處；然后對現(xiàn)在的情況進(jìn)行描寫，按照題目中所給的提示進(jìn)行書寫，寫的過程注意多使用被動形式如Now great changes have taken place in my hometown.能夠很好的看出寫作者的語言功底；最后展望家鄉(xiāng)會變得越來越好I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫作

點(diǎn)評：初中英語的作文，著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在“準(zhǔn)”字上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面。對于中考的作文，盡量將所學(xué)的知識運(yùn)用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文。在平時的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫，考試時就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。