Question

Bill有幸結(jié)識(shí)了一位外國(guó)朋友Peter,假如你是Bill,請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，給你的筆友 Peter寫(xiě)一封email，以便更好地了解你。

自我介紹	姓名，年齡，外表，個(gè)性特征，生活方式，學(xué)習(xí)情況。
興趣愛(ài)好	下棋，彈鋼琴，打籃球------
上次的假期經(jīng)歷及感受	去北京游玩------

要求：1.文章必須包括表中所有信息,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),但不要逐字翻譯。
2.根據(jù)需要可適當(dāng)用上比較等級(jí)的句子。
3.詞數(shù)在80--100詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出,你只需接著寫(xiě),不
計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
4.表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫,文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、班名
和人名。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m glad to be your pen pal.Let me tell you something about myself.                      
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
China is a great country for a visit.I hope you can come to China some day. I’m waiting for your coming!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Bill

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m glad to be your pen pal. Let me tell you something about myself. My name is Bill. I’m 15 years old. I’m tall but a little heavy. I ’m outgoing and helpful. At school ,I’m hard-working. My teacher says I’m the best students in my class. After school, I often help my friends with their lessons.
I have many hobbies. I like playing chess, playing the piano and collecting stamps. I often show my talents in the school Art Festival. I also like playing sports .I exercise two or three times a week. I love playing basketball. I’m on the school basketball team. I have a healthy lifestyle.
Now I want to tell you my last vacation, too. I went to Beijing for a trip with my family. We visited the Great Wall,Tian’anmen Square and the Palace Museum. They are great places of interest in Beijing. We also enjoyed delicious food in Beijing hutong. It was a wonderful trip. It was so forgetful.
China is a great country for a visit. I hope you can come to China some day. I’m waiting for your coming!
Best wishes!                                                
Yours,
Bill

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)但很簡(jiǎn)單，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要仔細(xì)考慮，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知，本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主，主語(yǔ)是第一人稱(chēng)和第三人稱(chēng)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇文章主要是自我介紹和自己的旅游經(jīng)歷。文中使用了outgoing，places of interest等較高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)和詞匯，而且還應(yīng)用了形容詞最高級(jí)best，playing等非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞以及使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞also等為文章增色不少。