Question

根據(jù)要求完成大作文，（共15分）
以下是張軍的英國(guó)筆友David 發(fā)給他的電子郵件，請(qǐng)閱讀郵件并根據(jù)其內(nèi)容以張軍的名義寫一封回信。
（60---80詞）

Dear Zhang, How are you ? I ‘m very happy to tell you that I have got a wonderful May Day. I climbed the beautiful mountain with my friends. When I got to the top of it, I felt that I was so great. What did you do on May Day? How did you like it? I’m waiting for your e-mail. David

Answer 1

Dear David
How are you ? I am happy to revieve your letter. I know about your May Day. Now ,let me tell you something about my holiday.
Last  Sunday I went to the park with my classmates ,we met at the school gate at  eight o'clock in the morning ,then we rode bikes to the park ,it took us about  half an hour to get there.when we got there ,there  were too many people in the park ,but  the park was  very  beautiful ,we  saw many beautiful flowers ,first we decided to  go boating on the lake ,the water was clear  ,we could see ourselves in the water ,after that we played hide-and -seek game ,it was really funny , suddenly we met  some foreigners ,they were from America ,we said hello to them and talked a lot with them about China ,and we introduced many  famous places of interest ,they were quite satisfied with our intriduction and they said :thank you ,at last we took some photos with them , at noon,we had a picnic in the park ,in the afternoon we returned to school ,though tired we felt  happy!
yours
Zhang

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要用表示收到信件和表示近況的語(yǔ)言，對(duì)五一活動(dòng)的描述，對(duì)五一假期的感受。主要是第一人稱和過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇書信應(yīng)用文格式正確，內(nèi)容表達(dá)清晰，過(guò)渡自然。在描寫五一假期如何度過(guò)時(shí)連詞的運(yùn)用使文章更有邏輯性，也更吸引人。如then， first ，after that， suddenly ，at last ，at noon ，though等。