Question

環(huán)境污染是當(dāng)今世界上最令人頭痛的問題，你知道污染有哪些，對(duì)我們的環(huán)境有怎么樣的影響？作為學(xué)生的我們，該如何去做才能保護(hù)到我們周圍的環(huán)境？請(qǐng)以“Saving the Earth”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。
提示詞：pollution, harmful, three Rs
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

Saving the Earth
Now in some places of our country, a number of people have been cutting down the trees in the forests because they need wood and more farmland. The areas of forests are getting smaller and smaller. Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests in 20 or 30 years. It is really a terrible thing. Where the forests disappear, dust storms will occur occasionally. The weather will get hot and dry. The whole earth will become a big desert. A lot of plants and animals will disappear.Crops will not grow anywhere. Life will be difficult for everyone. The human beings will be punished for their forest-destroying activities. Therefore, we should realize the importance of taking care of our forests. We should do our best to protect our living environment and keep our mountains green,the water clean, and the sky blue.

試題分析：本題要求寫一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的議論文。要求中已經(jīng)給出了主要要點(diǎn)，因此要求我們自由發(fā)揮的地方較多，只是需要注意不能遺留要求中的要點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前先要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題難度較大，由于給出信息較少，故解題前需要自己組織整理材料�？上雀鶕�(jù)要求列出簡要提綱，然后在動(dòng)筆寫作，不跑題偏題是做好書面表達(dá)的前提條件。