Question

請根據(jù)提示寫一篇題為The Population Problem的短文。
提示:   1.人口問題是當(dāng)今世界上最大的問題之一；
2.中國是世界上人口最多的國家；
3.如果人口增長過快，將會帶來許多嚴(yán)重問題：空間，工作，交通等方面。
4.我們應(yīng)繼續(xù)執(zhí)行計(jì)劃生育政策，以控制人口增長。
要求：1.詞數(shù)為90個(gè)左右；  
2.所有要點(diǎn)提示必須用完，不得逐字翻譯；
3.字跡工整，卷面整潔。
The Population Problem
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                             

Answer 1

The Population Problem
The population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It has become a serious problem. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for every family, but also for the whole nation. For example, there is less living space. It’s difficult for many people to find jobs. we are short of energy and water. Most cities are more crowded than before, and the traffic is much heavier.
I think we should do something to control the population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling China’s population.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類短文，所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，可有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料可知，本篇短文要把目前人口太多這一問題，以及我們中國人口的情況表達(dá)出來。通過分析可知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞、從句等，使上下文意連貫，表達(dá)富有條理，更有邏輯性。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量句式和短語，例如，not only…but also、be short of 、be known as、for example等。還有一些句型的使用，也為文章增色不少，例如，It’s difficult for many people to find jobs 、we should do something to control the population 、It has worked well in controlling China’s population.等�？偠�言之，這篇短文表達(dá)很流暢，層次很分明。我們平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中要注意積累和總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，或背誦一些較好的句子，寫作時(shí)可適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)流暢，富有條理。