Question

我國(guó)規(guī)定,從2008年6月1日起,所有的商場(chǎng)、超市等不得免費(fèi)提供塑料購(gòu)物袋。對(duì)此，我市大多數(shù)商家都積極響應(yīng)，但仍有一些店主不理不睬。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，說(shuō)明“白色垃圾”的危害并就“限塑”提出你的建議。

項(xiàng)目	內(nèi)容
塑料袋的危害	刮風(fēng)時(shí)四處飄落,影響環(huán)境的美觀; 易被動(dòng)物誤食,導(dǎo)致死亡; 燃燒時(shí)污染空氣; 有些塑料袋是有毒的,對(duì)人體健康不利,等等。
你的建議	商家應(yīng)該停止提供免費(fèi)塑料袋； 我們應(yīng)……(提供至少2條建議)

要求:  1、短文應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2、詞數(shù)不少于70詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3、文中不能使用真實(shí)的人名、校名。
4、參考詞匯：有毒的 poisonous
It is required that from June 1, 2008 free plastic shopping bags shouldn’t be offered . Most malls and supermarkets are happy to obey the rule, but still some shops ignore it. It is completely wrong. As we all know,                                                                             

Answer 1

It is required that from June 1, 2008 free plastic shopping bags shouldn’t be offered. Most malls and supermarkets are happy to obey the rule, but still some shops ignore. It is completely wrong. As we all know, plastic bags may fly with the wind and affect the environment. Animals eat them easily by mistake and die. When plastic bags are burning, they pollute the air. Some of them are poisonous, they are bad for our health. Food is easier to get bad if it is put into the plastic bags.
I think all the shops should stop offering free plastic bags. We should try to use cloth or paper bags instead of plastic ones when we are shopping. What’s more, whenever we see plastic bags on the ground, we should pick them up and put them into dustbins. If so, we are sure to make our city more beautiful.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，題目中給出的材料較為齊全。動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語(yǔ)言，列出簡(jiǎn)單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問(wèn)題。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，注意文后要適當(dāng)提出自己的建議。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，主要是用第三人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類(lèi)作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。