Question

假設(shè)你有一個(gè)好朋友叫Helen，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，介紹你的這位朋友。

Helen	Appearance	高而苗條，方臉，微笑的眼睛，留著長(zhǎng)發(fā)。
	Personalities	有幽默感；保守秘密；樂(lè)于助人（請(qǐng)舉一例）
	Hobbies	喜歡讀書(shū)，在今年“讀書(shū)周”活動(dòng)讀書(shū)最多； 喜歡旅游，上周日，與父母乘長(zhǎng)途汽車(chē)去了世界公園。
	Future plans	長(zhǎng)大后她想當(dāng)一名社會(huì)工作者。

 
要求：1. 須包含以上所有提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 詞數(shù)：80詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
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Answer 1

I have a good friend named Helen. She is tall and slim. She has a square face and smiling eyes. She has long hair.
Helen has a good sense of humour. I can tell her anything because she can keep a secret. She is also helpful. She often helps us with our homework. She likes reading. She reads/ read the most books in this year’s Reading Week. She likes travelling as well. Last Sunday, she with her parents went to the World Park by coach.
Helen is always willing to help others, so she would like to be a social worker when she grows up.

試題分析:
這是一篇給材料作文。給出的材料比較詳細(xì)，我們所要做的首先是應(yīng)用正確的英語(yǔ)句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫(xiě)作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)和數(shù)的問(wèn)題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)是單數(shù)第三人稱(chēng)較多。寫(xiě)作中語(yǔ)言要準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)明，說(shuō)明有條理，符合邏輯。