Question

Ellen 中學(xué)畢業(yè)后要去澳大利亞讀高中，但她擔(dān)心在陌生的環(huán)境里難以交到朋友。因此她給澳大利亞的筆友Andy寫信，向他傾訴煩惱。請根據(jù)下面這封郵件，以Andy的名義給Ellen回信。
Dear Andy,
How is everything going? I’m excited to tell you that I’m going to study in Australia this September. But I’m a shy girl and don’t know how to make new friends there. What shall I do? Could you give me some advice?
Ellen.
參考詞匯：be friendly to, the same hobbies, a good listener, smiling
要求：1. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但必須包含表格所提供的信息；
2. 詞數(shù)80~100（短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名與地名。
Dear Ellen,
I’m glad that you are coming to study in Australia.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Andy

Answer 1

Dear Ellen,
I’m glad that you are coming to study in Australia.I know your feeling well.Don’t worry.You should be friendly to everyone.Through this ,I believe,everyone will like you.Then you can should the same hobbies with others. The reason is simple, I believe that ‘the basis of friendship lies in great similarity between two persons’ heart and soul.Be confidence, you just need to show yourself and be yourself. Somebody will like your way of life, your personality.
Hope you find true friends!
Andy

試題分析：這是一篇書信作文，格式已給出�；匦艃�(nèi)容必須是給Ellen提出建設(shè)性的意見，告訴她怎么結(jié)交朋友。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如：插入語I believe的使用；the basis of；need to do sth等等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。