Question

上周末你帶了個(gè)外國朋友游覽了黿頭渚(the Turtle Head Park)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文。
1、黿頭渚是無錫最著名的名勝之一，每天吸引大量游客來賞景；
2、幾年前，那里環(huán)境差，交通擁擠。有些游客不注意保護(hù)環(huán)境；
3、如今已經(jīng)發(fā)生了巨大的變化......
4、將全身心投入學(xué)習(xí)，將來把無錫建成最適合人居的地方。
注意： 1、第3要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須用2句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2、詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Last weekend, I showed a foreign friend around the Turtle Head Park.__________________
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Answer 1

Last weekend, I showed a foreign friend around Turtle Head Park. It is one of the most famous places of interest in Wuxi. It attracts a lot of tourists here to enjoy its beauty every day. A few years ago, the environment there was bad and there was much traffic. Some tourists paid no attention to protecting environment. Now great changes have taken place. Tourists don’t pick the flowers any more. They don’t walk on the grass. I will put all my effort into my study and make Wuxi the most suitable place to live (in).

本文是一篇介紹黿頭渚的文章，要點(diǎn)基本上已經(jīng)給出，考生在寫作的過程中只需要將要點(diǎn)寫全，加上適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體。同時(shí)注意使用一些高級(jí)的詞匯如show… around, paid no attention to, put all my effort into my study等等。也要注意使用一些高級(jí)的句型，如make Wuxi the most suitable place to live (in).
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