Question

A Survey About "To Whom do You Go When in Trouble?"
假如你叫王平，參加了學(xué)校的“有煩惱向誰(shuí)說(shuō)？”的調(diào)查活動(dòng)。
調(diào)查結(jié)果：1.大多數(shù)向同學(xué)、朋友說(shuō)（理由：年齡相仿，容易交流和理解）
2.一些向老師、家長(zhǎng)說(shuō)（理由：經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富、可以得到幫助）
3.少數(shù)自己獨(dú)立解決（理由：不愿與人交流，難以與人相處）
請(qǐng)你根據(jù)中文提示用英語(yǔ)給某報(bào)社編輯寫一封80-100詞的信，說(shuō)明情況并提出你自己的觀點(diǎn)。

Answer 1

Dear editer:
I am asked to do a survey   "Whom do you ask for help  when you are in trouble?".and the result is as follows: 58％ of the students who areasked  say  they will turn to their friends or classmates,because they are at the same age, and they are easy to talk with and easily understanding deeply each other .30% say they will turn to their teachers and parents,because they love them ,protect them and they are believed in and experenced .only 12% think they will turn to nobody .because they are hard to talk with anybody. Such are what the students are thinking when they are in trouble .What advise you can give us?What should we do to help the students?
Sincerely yours,
Lihua

這是一篇要點(diǎn)作文，先要審題，這是給某報(bào)社編輯寫的信，寫作時(shí)首 先要注意書信格式，稱呼，正文，署名等，然后是正文，要寫清寫全要點(diǎn)，不要逐字逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)整理加工材料，也可以適當(dāng)添加讓文章更流暢。不要出現(xiàn)明顯的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，盡量用簡(jiǎn)單句，也可以可以用一些高級(jí)的句型。