Question

你是我校九年級(jí)學(xué)生，在畢業(yè)典禮上，你將對(duì)自己三年來(lái)與同學(xué)相處，從中學(xué)到許多知識(shí)和做人道理，自己將努力工作實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想等情況，表達(dá)自己對(duì)老師和同學(xué)感激之情，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)發(fā)言稿。以下提示詞可能對(duì)你有所幫助。
excited, happy,  It’s hard for sb to do sth, It’s kind of sb to do sth,  in the pass three years,
together, like, have fun, learn---from, succeed, study hard, graduation, keep on, achieve one’s dream, forget, last, ,forever, friendship.
Good morning, everyone,
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
That’s all, Thank you

Answer 1

Good morning,everyone,
It’s my honor to talk with all of you here.I feel so excited and so happy to speak here. It’s hard for me to believe that I’m leaving my dear teachers and classmates. It’s very kind of you to help me a lot. In the past three years,we have studied and lived together like a happy family. We have had fun together,too. I’ve learned a lot from you all. I have also learned that if I want to succeed, I must study hard first.After graduation,I will keep on working hard to achieve my dreams.I’ll never forget you.I hope our friendship will last forever.
That’s all, Thank you.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫(xiě)作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般過(guò)去及現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:it is adj for doing sth/to do sth做某事怎么樣；have fun玩得開(kāi)心；keep on doing sth堅(jiān)持做某事等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。