Question

3月29日是校園安全教育日，請你以“創(chuàng)建平安校園”為主題，根據以下三個方面的提示寫一篇英語演講稿。

How to keep safe in school
In P.E. classes	In the dining hall	In the science lab
wear sports shoes do warming up exercises …	don’t run wait in line …	keep your hands away from don’t work alone …

注意：文中不得出現真實的姓名、學校名；80-100詞左右，短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to keep safe in school.                               
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                            

Answer 1

Hello, everyone! It’s very important for us to keep safe in school. We should always keep our safety issue in mind. In order to do that, we should remember the following three tips.
First, we must wear sports shoes to protect ourselves in P.E. classes. Before taking sports, it’s very necessary to do warming up exercises. And never play too much.
Second, don’t run in the dining hall， for the floor may be slippery. We should avoid bumping into people. And we should also develop a good habit of waiting in line.
Third, when you are in the science lab, make sure to keep your hands away from the chemical materials. And don’t work alone, just do as the teacher asks you.
In all, the most important thing is your own awareness. We are precious. We need safety.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。以表格的形式給出了作文的主要內容，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點。根據材料內容確定主要句子的時態(tài)，及句式等重要內容。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。
點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤.