Question

我們經常聽到一些青少年抱怨老師或父母對他們要求太嚴格，不理解他們，給他們列了各種各樣學習、生活、穿著打扮、業(yè)余愛好、將來的工作等方面的要求和規(guī)定。孩子們對此也有自己的看法并希望在有些方面可以自己做決定。請運用虛擬語氣談一談假如你是父母或老師，你會怎樣處理與孩子或學生之間的關系。
要求：
1. 可以談論至少三條學校或父母的規(guī)定或要求
2. 詞數80左右。
3. 標題：  If I were a teacher ( parent )......

Answer 1

One possible version：
If I were a parent
Nowadays,many parents have generation gap with their children.I think if I were a parent ,I can deal with this problem well.
If I were a parent I would try to communicate with my child. I wouldn’t say I was not like this or that at his age. I would allow him to develop his hobbies,such as listening to pop music, watching action movies,choosing his own clothes. If I were a parent, I would encourage my child to have more fun after school. The most important thing is that I would set a good example for him and win his respect.
If I were a parent,I can be a friend of my child.

試題分析：考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。本文主要應用虛擬語氣，所以在寫作時，要尤其注意虛擬語氣的表達方式。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，開頭結尾相呼應。開頭指出現在父母和孩子之間有代溝，如果我是一名家長，我就能很好的處理這個問題。第二段論述自己的行動。此處用了虛擬語氣的表達If I were a parent I would try 。communicate with，develop his hobbies，set a good example這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。最后在說和孩子做朋友與文章開頭相呼應。