Question

你校與英國某中學結成姊妹學校，英方�？�編輯（Ann）來信了解你校的課外活動情況及你們的建議，請你根據(jù)下面提供的內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，（文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
生詞：興趣小組 interest group  活動 activity
活動時間：4：50 – 5：50
主要內(nèi)容：（1）體育類：籃球、足球；
（2）興趣小組活動： 繪畫 歌舞 電腦等；
（3）英語角 （周三下午）。
建議：（1）增加課外活動時間;
（2）減少作業(yè)量。
Dear Ann,
I’ like to tell you something about the out- of-class activity in our school. We usually
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

I’ like to tell you something about the out- of-class activity in our school. We usually have activities from 4:50—5:50 in the afternoon. We have different kinds of activities. Some students are interested in sports. They play basketball and football. We also have some special interest groups, such as drawing, singing and dancing. And now, We computer games are the most popular. On Wednesday afternoon we go to English Corner. We like speaking English there. We hope to spend more time on such activities and less time on homework.) 

試題分析: 這是一篇應用文寫作，寫一封信。給出的材料比較全面，我們所要做的首先是應用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。寫作前先結合要表達的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
點評：注意寫作中的時態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。