Question

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展與成熟，人們的購物方式也在發(fā)生改變。網(wǎng)上購物成為了一種時(shí)尚。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格提示，以Shopping on Line: Pros and Cons為題，寫一篇文章，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?

優(yōu)點(diǎn)	缺點(diǎn)
節(jié)約時(shí)間，避免勞累	只能看到圖片，看不到商品本身
價(jià)格通常較便宜	容易買自己不太需要的東西，造成浪費(fèi)
可選擇的商品品種多	可能會(huì)受到欺騙，不安全

要求：1.字跡工整，條理清晰。不少于80詞，開頭不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。
2.表格內(nèi)容必須全部包含在文章中。
提示詞：避免做某事 avoid doing sth    欺騙 cheat
Shopping on Line: Pros and Cons
With the development of the Internet, more and more people shop on line.                                                                                 
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                         

Answer 1

Shopping on Line: Pros and Cons
With the development of the Internet, more and more people shop on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Even some of us students join the group.
Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and you can save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. It’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. And shopping on line may cause you to buy goods that are not really needed. That’s a waste of money. When you shop on line, you should also be careful not to be cheated because it’s not safe to shop on line.
All in all, shopping on line has its advantages and disadvantages. It’s very useful. However, you should use it in the right way.

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)，是根據(jù)表格的內(nèi)容寫一篇文章。是關(guān)于網(wǎng)上購物的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)的，所以書寫應(yīng)從兩個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述。應(yīng)注意文章的人稱用it，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。表格中的內(nèi)容應(yīng)敘述完整，不能遺漏。書寫時(shí)一定要注意層次性，注意連詞的運(yùn)用。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題給出提示，這就減少了一定的難度。在書寫書信時(shí)，應(yīng)該注意格式，時(shí)態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組搭配，注意連詞的運(yùn)用。還要注意句子的順暢，應(yīng)符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。