Question

假如你們班明天下午召開一次關(guān)于英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方法交流的班會(huì)。請(qǐng)你以How do I learn English?為話題，根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇簡(jiǎn)短的發(fā)言稿。要求: 70詞左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
提示：1. 加入英語(yǔ)俱樂部；  2. 常去英語(yǔ)角； 3. 每天早晨早起記單詞； 4. 常做聽力練習(xí)；  5. 收看英語(yǔ)節(jié)目。
Good afternoon, everyone!
It’s an honor to talk with all of you here.                                                                                
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
                                                                                    
That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

Good afternoon, everyone!
It’s an honor to talk with all of you here. I want to give you some advice on how to learn English well. In order to improve my English, I joined an English club. And I often go to the English corner and talk with others in English. I usually remember new words as soon as I get up every morning. I often follow the tapes to do some listening practice. In my spare time, I often watch some English programs on TV. I have made some progress this term, and do you want to have a try?
That’s all. Thank you!

試題分析：本文的寫作注意條理性的把握，將文章的要點(diǎn)要進(jìn)行全面的說明。首先表達(dá)自己為了學(xué)好英語(yǔ)而加入了英語(yǔ)俱樂部I joined an English club.常去英語(yǔ)角和別人用英語(yǔ)交流go to the English corner and talk with others in English.每天早晨早起記單詞可以用as soon as句型來表達(dá)“一…就”，句式上顯得緊湊，活潑。然后說明自己常做聽力練習(xí)do some listening practice.收看英語(yǔ)節(jié)目I often watch some English programs on TV.最后呼吁大家也試試這些方法，并且自己已經(jīng)取得了一些成功do you want to have a try.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：初中英語(yǔ)的作文，出考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力外，還要求學(xué)生能夠變換句式，學(xué)會(huì)用不同的表達(dá)，來表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思，要在“準(zhǔn)”字和“美”上下功夫。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面，同時(shí)要學(xué)會(huì)多用副詞來修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，這樣顯示出深厚的語(yǔ)言根底。對(duì)于初三的作文，在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫，考試時(shí)就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。