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假設(shè)你叫李明，你們班級要選拔新班長，你想向班主任王老師推薦張航。請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容

寫一封100詞左右的推薦信。信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

姓 名	張航
特 長	精通電腦，擅長演講…
性格、品質(zhì)	自信、勤奮、謙虛、有條理、樂于助人…
個人事跡	經(jīng)�；ê芏鄷r間組織課外活動，從不介意為班級做額外的工作，總是盡最大努力幫助同學(xué)，深受同學(xué)們歡迎 …

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor.

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I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Mr Wang,

I’m writing to recommend Zhang Hang as our new monitor.

I think he has some strong qualities for this position. Zhang Hang is confident. He is good at making speeches. He also does well in computers.

He is hard-working, modest and organized. He often spends lots of time organizing after-school activities.

He is very helpful too. He never minds doing extra work for our class. He always tries his best to help other students. He is very popular with us.?????????????????????

I think Zhang Hang is the most suitable person to be our monitor.

I hope you can consider my recommendation.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇向班主任王老師推薦張航做班長的推薦信。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如I think……；He is……；He never minds……；I hope……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。最后希望老師考慮自己的推薦。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了推薦張航最為我們的新班長，接下來介紹張航的特長，性格品質(zhì)和個人事跡，最后希望老師考慮我的推薦。此處用了be good at, spend time doing sth，mind doing sth, be popular with 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。