Question

假如你叫劉明，是美國中學(xué)生艾麗斯的朋友，你收到了她的電子郵件，請(qǐng)給她回復(fù)，回答她的問題，提出你的建議。并就此事談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
你是否遇到過這樣的問題？
該借給她錢還是不借給她錢？
若她忘記歸還該怎么辦？
注意：恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用條件狀語從句，句子結(jié)構(gòu)要完整，80詞左右。
Dear Liu Ming,
Hi! I’m so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, I’m afraid she won’t pay me back. I don’t know what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Alice
Dear Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you .
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I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming

Answer 1

Dear Alice,
I am glad to hear from you. I think if she really needs the money, you’d better lend it to her. You don’t need to worry too much. She will probably pay you back when she has money. If you don’t lend her the money, I am afraid you may lose the friend. If she really forgets about the money, you can remind her in a polite way. For example, you can ask her if the money helped her at that time.
I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So when my friends need money, I will try my best to help them. Maybe I will get it back, or maybe I won’t.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封回信。本題材料主要是一封來信，故動(dòng)筆前一定要認(rèn)真閱讀來信。在回信中對(duì)涉及的問題都要有所回應(yīng)。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。寫作中注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：注意寫作中的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和數(shù)的問題，時(shí)態(tài)一般是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱是第一人稱較多。寫作中語言要準(zhǔn)確、簡明，說明有條理，符合邏輯。