Question

目前，我國(guó)實(shí)施城市化進(jìn)程中，從鄉(xiāng)村（鎮(zhèn)）遷入城市的大多數(shù)孩子存在諸多的問(wèn)題，假如你是Know，你的朋友Tony發(fā)電子郵件請(qǐng)教你關(guān)于如何交朋友的問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件提幾點(diǎn)建議，詞數(shù)約90左右。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1．在小區(qū)內(nèi)玩耍時(shí)，你可以主動(dòng)與他們交流成為新朋友，并告知家長(zhǎng)；2．請(qǐng)求父母帶你去圖書(shū)館或一些公共場(chǎng)所，既可認(rèn)識(shí)更多伙伴又可參加文體活動(dòng)；3．在星期天，可外出郊游等。4、…….(發(fā)揮1-2點(diǎn)）總之，多參加交流活動(dòng)，克服困難，保持耐心。
要求：1．涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，意思連貫，符合邏輯。2．卷面整潔，可不得逐字翻譯。

Answer 1

Dear Tony
There are lots of things you can do. First ,you can ride your bike in your neighborhood and try to find some kids. When you find some , you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some public places where there are lots of kids. You could try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays.You can try making friends at lunches too if you go to churches on Sunday. In conclusion, try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself .
It takes time and patience. I hope you will find a best friend soon.
Yours
Know.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求在交朋友方面給出建議。提示要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意文章的邏輯性就可以了。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，意思連貫，符合邏輯，并應(yīng)用了不少的復(fù)合句，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如some public places where there are lots of kids. try to be active wherever you are等。使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。