短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）

假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

       增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

       修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

       注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

          2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

John was visiting he 90-year-old grandpa, who lived in the country. In the first morning of the visit, John grandpa prepared a breakfast of bacon and eggs. John noticed some dirt on his plate, and asks, “Are these plate clean?” His grandpa replied, “They’re as cleaner as cold water can get them. Just go ahead and finish your meal.” For lunch, Grandpa made hamburgers. Again, John has found the plates were dirty, but he asked the same question. Without looking up, his grandpa gave same answer. Later, as John was left, his grandpa’s dog started to growl(咆哮), and wouldn’t let him pass. Grandpa shouted at the dog, “Cold Water, go lie down!”

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文,文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句最多有兩處.錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加,刪除和修改.
增加:把缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉.
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯誤極其修改均限一詞.
2.只允許修改10處,多者從第11處不記分.
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is common one among middle school students．Maybe the following advices can help you．First in all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any words．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him．Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．
Yours,
Lily

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加，刪除或修改某個單詞。

  增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

  刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

  修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線（_），并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

  注意：1  每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2     只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Jin Jing,

    Your problem is common one among middle school students. Maybe the following advices can help you. First in all, believe in yourself. Your greatest problem is that you don’t have self-confidence. The first thing you must do is to smile at your classmates. One smile speaks loud about your wish to make the friends than any word. Your smile will show that you are friendly to him. Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest with you. You can discuss your studies with a classmate, and you can also talk about your hobbies as well. Unless someone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her. Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．

                                                                                                             Yours，

                                                                                                               Lily

短文改錯
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
Best wishes.
　　                                                        Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

第四部分寫作(共兩節(jié), 滿分35 分)
第一節(jié)短文改錯
下面短文中共有10處錯誤，錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分； 3. 改錯在原文上改
Dear David,
Having been seen the notice on the Internet, I know you want to make friends in our country so as to learning Chinese and Chinese culture as well. I’m very glad to be your friends. Nowadays I am studied in a senior school. I can help you learn China and Chinese culture in some ways. If you will come here, we’ll stay together so that you’ll have chances to practice speaking and listening Chinese, at the same time I can learn English. I’ll show you around some famous attractions such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace for which you can have a good knowledge about Chinese culture.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua